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[DL] Juniper Montage + Mirror Release

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PonySFM: ponysfm.com/juniper-montage-mi…

Finished up this 3 days ago lol. 

Credits


Enhanced Pony Base JuiceDane 
Pony Base Poninnahka 
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Special Thanks
Stefano96 for helping on Compiling process plus optimizing textures and other small stuff
prettycritter16 for making Juniper Montage's Cutiemark
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Alright, here's a go at a critique for this model.

You did a really great job with this. I really like the details you put into the model, especially with the things like her hair ties and her hat. The inclusion of the mirror model is a welcome bonus as well.

However, there is one problem I've found with this model, and with a couple other pony models in general; some of the mane/tail bones, and in particular the "TailC" bone and the two jiggle bones for the tail, do not quite work as expected. By this I mean that when adjusting the rotation for these bones, the tail shape is affected on both sides of the tail, so it easily accidentally causes sharp angles and such in the tail, making it hard to pose the tail in a natural 'flowing' way.